Here is the latest draft of our thriller opening, The Witness.
The Witness (Draft3) from Lew Parker on Vimeo.
At present we have solved some of the issues that had been raised in the previous drafts. Furthermore, my choice to use Final Cut Pro X provided other elements that can be incorporated into the editing I had done so far; I found Pro X a great program to use.
Here are some of my considerations for the Final Version:
- Further consideration needs to be given to to the soundscape; building of texture and dynamics (more so in the second half).
- Flashback scenes may need further lines of dialogue over them.
- A couple of intercutting shots of the Head Mob Member (actor: Tommy) in between flashbacks, in order to create more tension.
- Positioning of key music to create further tension. (For example: samples such as 'foot scrapping' or more 'footstep' sounds).
I will be in contact with both Chris and Declan, show them the current draft of the video and then, get their opinion's on producing the final version.
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